How are these songs I wrote?

4 seperate songs can i get some feedback on them and maybe some rankings 1-4?



I鈥檝e been down before but not like this

Feeling鈥?like I got nothing to live for anymore



I toss and turn but that all right

As long as I live through the night one more time



My dreams are big just like the sky

And one day I鈥檓 gonna take flight and fly high



Soar like and eagle just like a bird

Floating in the air to your words your word



CHORUS

I鈥檓 gonna to glide into your arms again

Back to where I鈥檓 supposed to be

With you right next to me



I鈥檓 gonna glide right by your side

Be with you for life

And make you my wife







I鈥檝e been through it all and it all through

I鈥檓 left with nothing here without you without you



I want you to come down just like the rain

Lay in my arms and wash all the pain all away



Just sit with me and have a talk

Bout all the time that we lost the time we lost



Hold my hand right by your heart

And give this thing another start one more start



CHORUS

I鈥檓 gonna glide into your arms again

Back to where I鈥檓 supposed to be

With you right next to me



I鈥檓 gonna glide right by your side

Be with you for life

And make you my wife









BRIDGE

Nobody said that you had to come back

You make your own choices now

But I鈥檓 not just anybody I鈥檓 someone

That wishes somehow



You would glide into to my arms again

Back to where you鈥檙e supposed to be

Holding on to me

You would glide right by my side

Be with me for life

And just be my wife















Sometime I see a beautiful face staring back at me

And sometimes I see part of the man I鈥檓 supposed to be

Looking back on my past theres been some regrets

Looking back on my past I see everywhere I鈥檝e been



CHORUS

And I see the man that I鈥檝e become

Chasing down the sun

Always on the run



And I see the man I want to be

Always doing right

Shining like a light



I鈥檝e tried so hard to get right for so long

I鈥檒l keep being right and doing wrong







Making the bad choice has become my best friend

And I keep making them til each day comes to an end

I鈥檓 not saying that I can鈥檛 change my ways

I鈥檓 not saying that I don鈥檛 like makin mistakes





CHORUS

And I see the man that I鈥檝e become

Chasing down the sun

Always on the run



And I see the man I want to be

Always doing right

Shining like a light





I鈥檝e tried so hard to get right for so long

I鈥檒l keep being right and doing wrong































I鈥檓 always running around

Always looking down

Just hearing the sounds in my head

Of people telling me that I鈥檓 wrong



Always wanting some more

Always looking to score

Opening every door till I find the one

That lead me to where I belong





Another day goes floating by

I look up to the sky

And I鈥檓 wonder why

I just can鈥檛 spit out those three words



Got my fingers crossed

Got my knees locked

My heart is shot and I think I love you

But what is my love really worth











CHORUS

But when I feel like I found the one

I feel like it over and done

Wanna buy a ring and have a son

I always seem to run



I had the chance

To ask her to dance

And show her true romance from my heart

But I passed on it instead



Looked her in the eye

She wanted to cry

Cuz I was that guy that broke her heart

And I felt our love fall dead



She wasn鈥檛 the first

One that I鈥檇 hurt

More like the third or even fourth

That I seem to crush in two



I thought I had changed

Wasn鈥檛 the same

Left all my shame in the past

But somehow it catches up with you



CHORUS

But when I feel like I found the one

I feel like it over and done

Wanna buy a ring and have a son

I always seem to run



Bridge

Soon enough they鈥檒l come a day

When I mean the words I say

I love you won鈥檛 just be for play

Anymoreeeeee



CHORUS

Cuz one day I鈥檒l find the one

It鈥檒l be over and done

I鈥檒l buy a ring and have a son

And have nowhere to run































Stuck here on the side of the road

With no reason to go back home

Ain鈥檛 been the same since you left here

Being alones become my biggest fear



I just want to forget the past

But some memories always last

Try to do something new

But everything leads me to you



Chorus

Cuz I鈥檓 running forwards

And moving back

I just can't get my

Heart on track

And of all the things

One things true

The more I run

The more I move towards you





I usually don鈥檛 act this way

But my bright clouds have turned grey

Everyone see the sun still shines

But that in their world Cuz鈥?in mine



Chorus

I鈥檓 running forwards

And moving back

I just can't get my

Heart on track

And of all the things

One things true

The more I run

The more I move towards you



I鈥檝e gotta find a way to stop running back to you

And getting no where

I鈥檝e gotta find away to take off these running shoes

And face the truth but till thennnnn



Chorus

I鈥檓 running forwards

And moving back

I just can't get my

HeartHow are these songs I wrote?
I would say 2.5.



Only because your songs have been done before. Of course not word for word but the exact context and rhythm of words is so generic. When you write try thinking of the images and scenarios you see run through your head. Take that scene and describe the things people would not be able to feel or see without your description. Get in depth and detailed with your lyrics. Don't just tell people the obvious, tell them what they would not know.



In example, a generic song depicting a cold sad day would say something along the lines of ';It was wet, cold, and dark. The tear drops fell as I sat alone it the park';.



Getting detailed and personal would be more, ';A solitude of black-blue fell. Stuck in a hole of my own personal hell. Drops of water spoke of my pain. The city grew dead and there was no rain.';



Everyone's writing style is different but you have potential to be great. Just really close your eyes and see the story you are writing.